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What's mine is mine. by ~malefique:iconmalefique:





You tell me
"You can never have my soul".

You stand before me
A mere human
Before a power
Which is unfathomable to you

You tell me
I can have you
I can have
Your body
Your mind
Your Ego

But that I can never have your soul.

But you forget
That with today's prices
A soul is worth less than a good car.

Besides, child..
You are dealing with the devil
You cannot sell to me
Something I already own

And you signed the contract
The moment you spoke to me.

So be careful with what you say
Because while I can't have you
Your body
Your mind
Or your Ego

Your soul was mine
Since before the stars existed.

And your agreement
Is not even necessary.
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My first decent poem in ages. I hope it might have broken my writer's block))))

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:iconcelestial-elevator:
I intrerpret this as something a lover says to his woman...which is rather unsettling.

An interesting piece. It's nice to see some writing from you again, I hope you'll keep it up ;-)

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And the soul outwears the breast,
And the heart must pause to breath

-George Gordon Byron

My poetry
:iconmalefique:
Hehe.. it wasn't intended to be a lover's words, but I guess, in my current mood, my subconsciousness could have sneaked that message in there. :P

Thanks, as you see, I am a bit rusty, but I'll try to shake it off. xD

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"Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law."
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:iconcelestial-elevator:
well I think the lines

"And you signed the contract
The moment you spoke to me."


could refer to the first meeting of the man and woman. :)

Do keep writing.

--
And the soul outwears the breast,
And the heart must pause to breath

-George Gordon Byron

My poetry
:iconmalefique:
I was refering more to my own philosophy of "If a person speaks to you, s/he listens to your words. If a person listens to your words, he or she can be tricked and manipulated." with that, but I absolutely see what you mean. :))

Yea, I try ^^

--
"Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law."
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:iconcelestial-elevator:
I think the beauty of poetry is that it can be interpreted in so many ways.

--
And the soul outwears the breast,
And the heart must pause to breath

-George Gordon Byron

My poetry
:iconmalefique:
Point to you :)

--
"Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of the Law."
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Boring signature BETA 0.3
:iconcelestial-elevator:
yay ^^

--
And the soul outwears the breast,
And the heart must pause to breath

-George Gordon Byron

My poetry

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